I noticed. A person visited the site. The person looked at a web page. The web page contained text. The text described game rules. I decided to take a look for myself. I found. The text was in need of a rewrite. There were some errors in the text. Some of the sentences were just too long. Aside from the errors, the text made sense to me. However, the text did read a bit like computer code. For that reason, I rewrote the text. Shortened the sentences. Made the text easier to comprehend. Communicated more effectively. I had the ability. I am grateful.
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11 Tuesday Jan 2022
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